Compared tot the original stuff, you have done some amazing work. The shape of the belly and boobs is fantastic. The nipples and belly button showing too is fantastic. The clothes coloring is very sickly but I love the ripped look on it. The bashed knees say she been on her knees a lot stuffing herself. I like that addition. I like the shape of her face and the cheeks and eyes are well done. Her hair is very well done but too similar to Korra's hair from Avatar. In Conclusion, You have the perfect shape and look but the coloring needs a bit of improvement. Very good Job in total
ok well i think it's fair but the bandage and the hairstyle are parts of her original design cause as i've said this character is not from my creation this is just fanart so i can't change that on her actual design and actually this gal exist from way before korra was aired or anything, lol i can see her belly button, but her nippels aren't showing at al D:
Good point, I did not notice the published date so I must apolgise for that. I think the nipples where a trick of the eye, the shading makes it look like nipples but if you did put some in, just add too it.
I'm glad you found it fair and hey, its a critique. We have to show the good and the bad.